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It's been a while... so yeah, the art's a bit rusty.

Sadly, I have a low supply of creativity and time right now.

~vampbabe-stock - [link]
*clandestine-stock - [link]
~Alegion-stock - [link]
=randomstarlight - exclusive textures pack
sabinki @ sxc.hu - [link]

1800x2400px, 300 dpi. Photoshop CS2. Mouse.
Gonna try out the critique system.

Critiques


:iconlazybutt:
Hey, Ruby! It has certainly been a while, and I hope you're doing good. :)

I know I'm probably the least qualified person to give you this critique, but I'm going to take a stab at it anyway, heh. Forgive me if I'm making no sense!

I can see where you put the time and effort into this piece, and from what I can tell it mostly looks good. The highlighting on the hair and jewlery are great, and I feel like they bring the eyes to the important parts of the piece: the face, and the mirror.

That being said, I do have some issues with certain places on the artwork. The girl's reflection in the mirror seems to be unedited, yet her face is soft and smooth, and clearly edited. Perhaps I'm missing a concept here, but it throws the effect of the piece off for me. I also am having a hard time making out what the white outline on the upper part of her right arm, and around her dress is. For me it's an unnecessary distraction.

Looking at the link to the original stock photo of the girl, I do have to say that I like what you did with her hair. It adds a bit of elegance to the entire piece. It's not very noticeable, but it seems like the reflection doesn't have the same treatment though.

Overall this piece is nice, and it's good to see some new artwork from you!
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:icondbi-znt:
Heh, not bad for a "rusted" person!
I see you loosed that texture overlay you used to do in your old pieces; it's a welcome change. The colors are pretty good, too. Looks like a little princess!
:iconsilentplea:
Beautiful work :heart:

--
~Shelley

What lies behind us
And what lies before us
Are small matters compared to
what lies within us

~Ralph Waldo Emerson~
:iconrandomstarlight:
gorgeous work! glad you found my stock useful! :)

--
Imagined the future,
woke up with a scream.
I was buying some feelings
from a vending machine.


The Verve
:iconthe-night-one:
Oh Ruby,
I think it is a great start! Keep it going girl!!
JN
:iconcryingsorceress:
Yep, a little princess. Something cutesy for a change.
Thanks. Textures made everything easy :P

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GALLERY | STOCK

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